Invite-only screenplay workspace
Know what to rewrite next. Diagnose story problems with evidence, turn them into scene-level tasks, and get back to the page.
THE SALT LINE
Starter screenplay · calculated story model
EXT. RIOS RANCH - IRRIGATION DITCH - DUSK
Rows of almond trees, half of them the color of paper.
DELL
Forty acres last spring. Ninety now.
SAM FERRO, 19, drags a hose past them, coughs into a bandana, folds it before anyone can see the color.
Evidence, not vibes
These are real findings from the included starter screenplay. Doctor explains why the warning exists, what triggered it, and where the evidence lives.
Trigger
Subplot Sam's lungs has no resolution scene.
Evidence
Setup scene 4, page 8. The script never answers whether the valley admits Sam was poisoned.
Answer it, or cut the setup so the audience never asks.
Trigger
Six consecutive scenes stay within one tension point.
Evidence
Scenes 7-12 hold tension values of 7, 8, 7, 7, 8, and 6.
Raise one scene, drain another, or cut the middle.
Trigger
Act 1's page share differs from its target by eight percentage points.
Evidence
23 pages across eight scenes: 33% actual versus a 25% target.
Review the two weakest scenes in Act 1.
A closed rewrite loop
01
Find structural, pacing, continuity, and draft-state problems with the evidence attached.
02
Convert a useful warning into a rewrite task tied to the scenes that need attention.
03
Open the relevant scene with one clear objective, then return to Doctor when the draft changes.
You retain ownership of the drafts and story material you bring into Perfectstory.
Workspace access is invite-only, with authenticated routes and project-level ownership checks.
Supabase supports authentication and data infrastructure. Resend handles product email delivery.
Product suggestions are editorial aids, not guarantees of quality or commercial outcome. Keep independent source copies of your work.
FAQ
No. Perfectstory identifies story risks, shows the evidence behind them, and turns findings into concrete rewrite work. The writer decides what changes and writes the pages.
Doctor rules inspect the project model and screenplay metrics, including unresolved threads, pacing patterns, act proportions, character continuity, and draft state. Every finding exposes its reason, trigger, evidence, and a suggested next action.
A writer can dismiss, downgrade, or restore a finding. That feedback is retained so repeated review stays relevant instead of presenting the same unwanted note as new information.
No. The beta uses access controls, but it is not a confidentiality or archival service. Do not upload highly sensitive material, and keep your own source copies.
Request an invite with a short note about your current writing workflow. Beta requests are reviewed manually, and approved testers receive a Supabase invitation by email.
Private beta requests are reviewed manually. Tell us what you write and where your current rewrite process breaks down.